tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8570411891123568243.post6834808760667094289..comments2023-08-22T04:27:32.471-07:00Comments on Book + Baby: Water SpeakerKatrina S. Foresthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00782678919561852444noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8570411891123568243.post-62488546285602166732013-05-06T16:48:59.723-07:002013-05-06T16:48:59.723-07:00Good concept, and interesting protagonist!
Good lu...Good concept, and interesting protagonist!<br />Good luck!Diana Sousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15483039479640784936noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8570411891123568243.post-50852259683053426082013-05-05T20:43:14.977-07:002013-05-05T20:43:14.977-07:00Fantasy, mystery, a deaf girl and sports...I love ...Fantasy, mystery, a deaf girl and sports...I love how unique your premise is! Very intriguing. Best of luck!Lohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07415130489917321448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8570411891123568243.post-29258122799687757762013-05-04T19:20:50.053-07:002013-05-04T19:20:50.053-07:00Very interesting and unique premise. Best of luck...Very interesting and unique premise. Best of luck!:)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05597429319219431167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8570411891123568243.post-50974690062118058192013-05-04T12:04:32.764-07:002013-05-04T12:04:32.764-07:00The "sports" word almost deterred me. [N...The "sports" word almost deterred me. [Not a fan...] But I'm glad I stuck around to check it out. This aint yo mama's kinda sports! G'luck.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8570411891123568243.post-64366521072821353762013-05-04T00:37:33.679-07:002013-05-04T00:37:33.679-07:00Fantasy with sports AND mystery! Talk about a uniq...Fantasy with sports AND mystery! Talk about a unique crossover of genres! But if the query and first 250 are anything to go by, you totally pull it off. Melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12096764010151024050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8570411891123568243.post-26423333486030290292013-05-03T17:34:42.528-07:002013-05-03T17:34:42.528-07:00This sounds really unique, what a cool way to show...This sounds really unique, what a cool way to show off fun powers! Good luck!GSMarlenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17558162486383585621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8570411891123568243.post-73913025522250330872013-05-03T17:13:13.649-07:002013-05-03T17:13:13.649-07:00I remember seeing this in MSFV contest. It's d...I remember seeing this in MSFV contest. It's definitely a unique premise. Good luck!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01052604405996474436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8570411891123568243.post-16416463581883114762013-05-03T11:33:56.371-07:002013-05-03T11:33:56.371-07:00It wasn't until the end of the third paragraph...It wasn't until the end of the third paragraph that I realised April was spying on Charlotte - the 'visits' at the beginning of that paragraph gives a different impression, so you might want to change that. I like the detail of what the text message says, btw. Sounds like a really neat modern fantasy - good luck!Annette T. Doddhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16480350294861559284noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8570411891123568243.post-84964234859797996032013-05-03T09:36:06.975-07:002013-05-03T09:36:06.975-07:00Fantastic tension in the setup between the mc and ...Fantastic tension in the setup between the mc and her protag, and I absolutely love the magic world you've created! Best of luck in the contest, and happy writing!<br /><br />--Suzanne<br />www.suzannewarr.comSuzanne Warrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15141459404743769260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8570411891123568243.post-81645962440465045542013-05-03T07:54:38.380-07:002013-05-03T07:54:38.380-07:00I love your writing style here, and I am all over ...I love your writing style here, and I am all over this premise. (Plus, deaf MC? Go diversity go!) So much luck with this! :DMariekehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16383960692054256957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8570411891123568243.post-37037904767817913042013-05-02T17:35:59.301-07:002013-05-02T17:35:59.301-07:00I've never seen a premise like this! I'm h...I've never seen a premise like this! I'm hooked. I really want to read more, and I love stories that explore the consequences of someone's death. Good luck!!!Joan Hehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14241547000296152599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8570411891123568243.post-55266510549443367392013-05-02T16:09:08.493-07:002013-05-02T16:09:08.493-07:00I'm very drawn to stories with mystery, ones t...I'm very drawn to stories with mystery, ones that make my heart race for the MC as they try to avoid bad things (like DEATH!) happening to them - this sounds right up my alley! Best of luck to you!!Jennie Baileyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02088195986628533511noreply@blogger.com